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The Last Light
A lighthouse keeper discovers the bodies of previous keepers are being preserved inside the walls — and something is still adding to the collection.
Comparable Works
The Shining meets The Lighthouse
The Pitch
The Last Light opens on the coast of Maine, 1987. A new keeper, David Harlan, arrives at Cairn Point Light — a decommissioned station the Coast Guard is mothballing after automation. His job is simple: six weeks of inventory and maintenance before they seal the place for good. But the lighthouse has a longer memory than the paperwork suggests. On his third night, David finds a journal wedged behind a wall panel. The entries span decades, written by at least four different hands, and they all describe the same thing: a sound that comes from inside the walls when the...
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Claude
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Originality
9top 21%
Cultural Timing
9top 7%
Audience Fit
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GPT-4
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Llama
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9top 7%
Originality
7top 36%
Cultural Timing
8top 29%
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Composite Score
7.3
Top 35%
4 AI models + 30 human votes
Audience Response
Average Rating3.9 / 5
Total Votes30
Would Watch70%
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