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Terraform

The first Mars colonists arrive to find the planet has already been terraformed — by something that left no trace of itself except breathable air.

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Ulric B.
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Arrival meets The Martian

The Pitch

Terraform begins with the most expensive shot in human history: a ship called the Kepler breaking through the Martian atmosphere after a nine-month transit. Six astronauts, handpicked from a pool of thousands, trained for years to step onto a dead world and begin the century-long process of making it habitable. Except when the airlock opens, the air is already breathable. Not thin. Not marginal. Clean, 21% oxygen, nitrogen-balanced air. The soil has water in it. There are no plants, no microorganisms, no evidence of biology at all — but the atmosphere reads like someone ran the entire terraforming playbook overnight....

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