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Terraform
The first Mars colonists arrive to find the planet has already been terraformed — by something that left no trace of itself except breathable air.
Comparable Works
Arrival meets The Martian
The Pitch
Terraform begins with the most expensive shot in human history: a ship called the Kepler breaking through the Martian atmosphere after a nine-month transit. Six astronauts, handpicked from a pool of thousands, trained for years to step onto a dead world and begin the century-long process of making it habitable. Except when the airlock opens, the air is already breathable. Not thin. Not marginal. Clean, 21% oxygen, nitrogen-balanced air. The soil has water in it. There are no plants, no microorganisms, no evidence of biology at all — but the atmosphere reads like someone ran the entire terraforming playbook overnight....
AI Evaluations
Claude
7· top 36%
Commercial Viability
6top 36%
Originality
9top 21%
Cultural Timing
8top 36%
Audience Fit
7top 21%
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GPT-4
8· top 14%
Commercial Viability
8top 29%
Originality
8top 21%
Cultural Timing
8top 29%
Audience Fit
8top 21%
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Gemini
8· top 21%
Commercial Viability
7top 29%
Originality
8top 14%
Cultural Timing
7top 43%
Audience Fit
8top 21%
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Llama
7· top 21%
Commercial Viability
7top 36%
Originality
7top 36%
Cultural Timing
6p36
Audience Fit
5p21
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Composite Score
7.4
Top 27%
4 AI models + 30 human votes
Audience Response
Average Rating3.6 / 5
Total Votes30
Would Watch73%
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